literature

Goodbye

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I saw you
But now I don't see you anymore
The time was running out
Our time together was final
And most of my life you were done
You needed to live through others
Like through me
And even when you did so
You never gave up
You were always ready for a challenge till the end
You were always talking before thinking
Always telling the truth
And that was not always for the best
But we loved you anyway
We saw you
Your bubbling energy
Your straightforwardness
Your lust for life
I miss you
You were a fighter
A one of a kind
One that shouldn´t have left
But time passes
And we don't control what happens
We just know it will happen
I just know I cried
I just know it ended
I just know it was for the best
Still I wish it could be different
That everything was a fairytale lie
But I have to face reality
The time passed
Even through I would wish that I could rewind it
I must be grateful to have known you
And I am
Because I saw you
And now I don't see you anymore
This is a poetry I have translating. I won´t tell you what it is about because I want to hear your opinion first. So far not one have had the same experience of my poem. They have thought it is about love, lose an etc. But what do you think?
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sailorcancer01's avatar
That's a very good poem that you've wrote birthday girl. BTW many happy returns. :hug: :happybounce: in case you're wondering many happy returns is my way of giving my :devart: friends birthday wishes.